August Essay

These are the three winners of the August essay. The topic was healthy teeth.

Dan

#1 first place winner

We had a tie for first place. Honey Joy was one of them, here is her Essay again for your enjoyment.

Honey Joy U. Ognit

Grade4 Bonifacio

Sacred Heart Elementary School July 23,2009Question:

Why is it important to learn English?Answer:It's important to learn English espisailly now. to explain how important learning english we should site some example. Examples,when you are applying abroad or simply applying some jobs here in our country, you will notice that the application forms are written in english, so how could you fill it up if you don't know how to understand and read english? and also if you will have your enterview, you should speak english mostly.Just simply as that.Learning english is that priority of the schools now. When you are going to another place and the language used is different from the language you are using, english is the language you are using, english, Because not only here inthe Philiphines are learning english we anderstand the question of teacher, It's important to learn English becouse it has powerfull subject

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#2 first place winner

Here is Angelynes' First place essay for you to enjoy again.

Angelyne L Bonani

Grade 4 Bonifacio

Why is it Imoprtant to learn English?English is important to learn because In order to sound educated and literate people need to throughly study English. It is also heavily needed in the business world as well as your own private world. Englis also teaches you to communicate and process things more accurately. If we didn't have set English language communicating would be extemely difficult. The main reason to study English is to sound educated and literate. In order to advance in the professional world you must have proper English and good speech.English is important to learn because this ties in the reason for why studying English thoroghly is important in the business world. In order to obtain a good career advancement as well as respect from your peers you have to be literate andwell educated.

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second place winner

Dawn Pearl C. Amante IV- BonifacioWhy is it important to learned English? an additional reason for studying English is for communication. You are much more accepting the world if you portray yourself better. People will think of you in a better way and you will have a better chance of being accepted. You will most likely also have opportunities in life.In conclusion there are many reasons as to why studying english is important.One is being that you sound more educated and literate, two is to communicate properly with others, and three because ot is importnat for career advancementand respect in the business world. Learning English never ends, there is the English dictionary that has so many words in that most people have never ever utilzed or heard. Learning to properly use one new word each week is a great way to continually learn to utilized the English language.

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Third place winner

Angelyne I. Bonani Grade IV- Bonifacio

Why is it important to learned English?

English is important to learn because in order to sound educated and literate people need to throughly study English. It is also heavily needed inthe business world as well as your own private world. English also teaches you to communicate and process things more accurately. If we didnt have set English language communicating would be extremely difficult. The main reason to study English is to sound educated and literate. In order to advance in the professional world, yoou must have proper English and good speech.English is important to learn because this ties in the reason for why studying English thoroughly is important in the business world. In order to obtain a good career an advancement as well respect from your peers you have to be literateand well educated.

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Sacred Heart Essay Contest

Good news....Everybody is a winner. All those that submitted an essay get 20pesos even though they didn't come in 1st 2nd or 3rd. We also had a tie for 1stplace, so both will get 500 php. It was very hard to judge them as everyone hada good essay. Rose and I read and re-read many over and over.Tomorrow morning we will award the prizes and take many pictures. So stay tunedfor a good time.Also next week we will feed them again. So if anyone wants to share in that justsend me an email and let me know how much you want to donate.

Mabuhay,

Dan

4th grade essays

Angelyne L Bonani Grade 4 BonifacioWhy is it Imoprtant to learn English?English is important to learn because In order to sound educated and literatepeople need to throughly study English. It is also heavily needed in thebusiness world as well as your own private world. Englis also teaches you tocommunicate and process things more accurately. If we didn't have set Englishlanguage communicating would be extemely difficult. The main reason to studyEnglish is to sound educated and literate. In order to advance in theprofessional world you must have proper English and good speech.English isimportant to learn because this ties in the reason for why studying Englishthoroghly is important in the business world. In order to obtain a good careeran advancement as well as respect from your peers you have to be literate andwell educated.